Questioning the cost/benefit of querying

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Hi all,

Just started querying after 4 months of paralysis. For context, I work as a freelance writer and have two published creative nonfiction books.

A few years ago I queried another novel and got some encouraging personal feedback (very polished, pleasure to read, don't give up, etc.) but ultimately no bites. I stopped querying that novel after just a few weeks because deep down I felt it wasn't ready for prime time. Before that I wrote another novel that I never shopped around, for the same reason.

I feel this novel is much stronger and have polished it (and the two versions of my query letter) as much as I can, with help from AW and others. So. Sent out ten queries so far, got two rejections. I realize that's not even a drop, but I'm finding the process much, much harder than ever before. On the one hand I believe it's the best work I've ever done. On the other hand I wonder: if it's as fresh, timely, and well written as I think it is, why aren't agents lining up?

I'm now questioning the cost/benefit of the whole process. If I have to get my gut punched 40, 60, or 100 more times, with no guarantee of a score, is it really worth it? I keep trying to talk myself into a robotic, ego-less mode, but it's not working so far.

I've also been wondering if I should query all potential agents at once and be done with it. This book will live or die on the concept, so I don't think any query/MS tinkering is going to make much difference at this point. Thoughts?

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It sounds like you're feeling a bit like I did when I queried my debut novel, after my first book failed to sell and my second book lost me my first agent. Now I'd written a third book, and I was so DONE with all the rejection. I tried a Twitter pitch thing and got no bites. Was the concept worthless after all?

I can't say I have an answer. Basically, I did my best to pretend to be "robotic and ego-less" even though I was not (is any writer those things, ever?). I kept myself on a strict schedule of sending out five queries every week or two, I think, and revenge-querying for each rejection (most were NRs).

I kept fiddling with the query and pages, which in retrospect I think was pretty pointless. Still, I'm not sure it's a good idea to query everyone simultaneously, tempting as it may be to get it over with. You could try 10 queries per week and simply force yourself to churn them out. It will not be fun. It will not be exciting (probably). It might pay off.

Just remember that a slew of form rejections doesn't necessarily mean another agent won't find your concept fresh and timely and fall in love with it. Yes, we all want to be that writer who instantly has multiple offers because her concept is just so amazingly saleable. But in a crowded market, that may not happen. Think of yourself as trying to find the one agent who is the perfect audience for the book, who will then find the one editor who is the perfect audience for the book, who will then do her best to target the booksellers, bloggers, and buyers who are the perfect audience for the book.

That probably won't be everyone. I had some meh responses from agents to my full. I have some meh (and worse) reviews on Goodreads. But a panel of booksellers liked my book enough to choose it for Indies Introduce. They were the right readers for that book. Sometimes it takes a ton of perseverance to find the right readers. It almost always takes more than 10 queries.

Just shield your gut and remind yourself this one book is this one book. Everything doesn't rest on selling it. But you wrote it, so you want to give it a chance to find the readers who will love it.
 

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I think doing a cost/benefit analysis of being an author in general is a bad idea. Might make us all cry.
 

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Hi Fuchsia,
Thanks for taking the time to respond. All good points. I've been thinking of Twitter-pitching but don't know how to go about it. Do I just "follow" the agent/contest in question and then submit my 140-character pitch on the appointed day?
 

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Hi Fuchsia,
Thanks for taking the time to respond. All good points. I've been thinking of Twitter-pitching but don't know how to go about it. Do I just "follow" the agent/contest in question and then submit my 140-character pitch on the appointed day?

All the Twitter pitch contests I know of aren't done by specific agents, and you aren't supposed to @ your tweets at agents. Here's a link to the #pitmad rules to give you an idea of how that one works.
 

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I think doing a cost/benefit analysis of being an author in general is a bad idea. Might make us all cry.

So true. And yet we persist. (I could not find an emoji adequate to this sentiment, so here's a mysterious eggplant. :) :eggplant)

Twitter pitching is done by using a particular hashtag on a particular day, in my experience. (All contests have their own rules, as JJ Litke pointed out.) It can be fun, but I think it tends to be focused on certain genres and categories (YA more than adult, for instance, in many contests). It doesn't allow you to laser-target agents seeking your genre the way querying does.
 

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As someone who went through part of the process already, I definitely feel your reluctance. I can't speak for anyone else, but for me, landing a great agent was definitely worth it. Also, finding out the results and not wondering about them, is also part of the process. I say I went through part of the process, because with each book there is the challenge of wondering if it will sell. I don't think the 'process' is ever really over. This is all part of the writing life, for better or for worse. Not sure that helps except to say that we all probably feel a bit of what you're feeling, at some point.
 

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Hi again,
I checked out the #PitMad instructions but, having only limited familiarity with Twitter, I'm still a bit clueless. On the appointed day, do I just search for the #PitMad hashtag and then post my query directly into that feed? Do the posts disappear after a while? How do I know if an editor "favorites" my query? TIA.
 

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You don't have to find the PitMad feed, you just add the hashtags to your own tweets. Then anyone who clicks on a #pitmad hashtag will see all tweets using that hashtag.

Tweets don't disappear from Twitter unless they're purposely deleted by whoever posted it.

You can see who retweeted or favorited any of your tweets by checking your notifications.
 

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Thanks for clearing up my confusion, JJ! As you can see, I'm pretty clueless even though I have a (rarely used) Twitter account.
 
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