Oh, it’s out there. It pervades the internet and so much of it is wrong. And I despair. Even those professionals who know so very much about many aspects of writing can be misinformed about one aspect . . . or they may not have the words to convey the concept effectively. (All you have to do is skim a few of my posts to see that I, too, suffer from this inability.) There’s good writing advice out there, too; it sometimes gets lost in the noise, unfortunately.
Gah! There’s so much I want to say to you, but I’m old . . . getting older by the minute and it seems the moments of my life are flying down the track as though they had purchased heavily-discounted tickets on Amtrak.
How strange it may seem to you that I, a non-writer, care so very much about your writing careers. I do. I want you all to be the very best writers you can be and to enjoy success in your writing careers. I’m a reader and I’m selfish that way.
We’ve had so many threads devoted to “show, don’t tell” and I want to cry at some of the comments I read. “Show, don’t tell” is good writing advice—it’s great writing advice if you know what it means. You’ll see comments that you have to balance showing and telling, that sometimes you have to “tell”. No, just no. That represents a fundamental misunderstanding of what “show, don’t tell” means.
A novel is all about perception. It’s about how your character perceives their world and what is going on around them in that world. Everything your character thinks, feels, sees, tastes, and hears must be conveyed. And that’s how you immerse your readers in your novel.
So, for those intrepid souls who truly do wish to be great novelists, I propose an exercise:
Any takers? I wonder.
Gah! There’s so much I want to say to you, but I’m old . . . getting older by the minute and it seems the moments of my life are flying down the track as though they had purchased heavily-discounted tickets on Amtrak.
How strange it may seem to you that I, a non-writer, care so very much about your writing careers. I do. I want you all to be the very best writers you can be and to enjoy success in your writing careers. I’m a reader and I’m selfish that way.
We’ve had so many threads devoted to “show, don’t tell” and I want to cry at some of the comments I read. “Show, don’t tell” is good writing advice—it’s great writing advice if you know what it means. You’ll see comments that you have to balance showing and telling, that sometimes you have to “tell”. No, just no. That represents a fundamental misunderstanding of what “show, don’t tell” means.
A novel is all about perception. It’s about how your character perceives their world and what is going on around them in that world. Everything your character thinks, feels, sees, tastes, and hears must be conveyed. And that’s how you immerse your readers in your novel.
So, for those intrepid souls who truly do wish to be great novelists, I propose an exercise:
- Take down your favorite novel, the novel that once you’d finished reading it you clasped to your chest almost prayerfully and thought, “Why oh why can’t I write like that?”
- Go through it and mark pages with post-it notes. It’s better if you also have a pen and notebook for note taking.
- Come back here and post a passage. Tell us how that passage made you feel, how it helped you to see the action and the world of the book, and how it helped you to know the character. Use the most descriptive language you can bring to bear to show how that novel affected you.
Any takers? I wonder.