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Thread: Can you edit a 400 word travelogue? [25$]

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    New Fish; Learning About Thick Skin Skyrr's Avatar
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    Can you edit a 400 word travelogue? [25$]

    I've written a travelogue to a special lady I met a couple of years ago, and I'll send it to her as an old fashioned letter. But before doing so I need feedback on my text. English is a second language for me, and she studies writing at college, so it won't be easy to impress her. I am going for wit and charm, but have no idea whether I've succeeded.

    Send me a PM if you can take a look at it.
    Last edited by Skyrr; 05-01-2017 at 06:57 PM.

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    If your small travelogue is written as clearly as your post, I doubt it needs much in the way of editing. Your English is not a weakness.

    Send it.

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