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I am writing 1st person POV past tense, in her flow of thoughts it often seems natural to start her next thought/sentence with But, but is this something that's a no-no that I will regret and have to edit out later? Or is it one of those okay if you like things?
Example:
I had never been able to clear my mind enough before, so it was a laughable exercise to try now. But I had nothing else to do.
Thanks!
Example:
I had never been able to clear my mind enough before, so it was a laughable exercise to try now. But I had nothing else to do.
Thanks!