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Marlys

Resist. Love. Go outside.
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Zombie love! Piet yearns
to give his heart to Yves but
wants to keep his brains.
 

Marlys

Resist. Love. Go outside.
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Okay, haiku loglines for two other WIP, mostly to bump the thread (come on in, people! the water's fine):

Oops. Eight of the men
Prince Chessman killed in the war
were on his own side.

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Love, sex, and dragons!
Do you really need twelve more
syllables for this?
 
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Chase

It Takes All of Us to End Racism
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Highline Haiku

Montana mystery
Guns along the Yellowstone
The cowboy dunnit​
 

Sage

Currently titleless
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Cheering you all on!
Ray fights Jack Frost for
Mother Nature's mantle, but
Love for Jack might win
 

KateSmash

this was a triumph
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Fell in a portal.
The only way to get home
is through her best friend.
 

amergina

Pittsburgh Strong
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Ray's Band is failing
until Zavier joins them.
Will sparks destroy all?
 

neandermagnon

Nolite timere, consilium callidum habeo!
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Cloned Neandertal
posts on social media
and all modern stuff
 

Yzjdriel

forgetful elephant
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Wrote a book of poems
Guess what? It got rejected.
Now I'm writing this.

Here's the idea:
I first became inspired
while I was driving.

Snowy December;
A young girl walks home alone.
He sees her shiver.

He stops next to her
and asks if she wants a ride.
She says, "Yes, thank you."

This is the story
of the days he drove her home.
Title? The Ride Home.

 

jjdebenedictis

is watching you via her avatar
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I want to play too
But book's an idea-splat
In no state to share
 

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Revenge, or avenge
Is there a difference? Perhaps
it's best not to know.

Don't judge me, I haven't written a haiku since middle school. Great thread!
 

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A young man sails forth
The game of gods is afoot
Who will lose? who win?
 

quicklime

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Written for someone,
And something, dead long ago
Too little, too late