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Honestly, this is a selfish request as on my latest book I am querying I have a feeling my opening might be a tad too flat. I feel it picks up after the first couple pages (pirates kidnapping the MC's dad seems like a good reason for that) but worry the beginning doesn't have that pizzazz you need it to have. I recently saw the opening for the first Harry Potter book and I forgot how much I loved that opening and it drew me in. I was hoping the great community here could suggest books with great openings. While this is obviously a selfish request I hope others get something out of it as well!
Thanks so much, as always, everyone's help is greatly appreciated.
Thanks so much, as always, everyone's help is greatly appreciated.