GoreQuill NachoVidal
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*scatters nuts for sharp-eyed critters*
I used this line in my last story: This was true wisdom, this above all should be saved.
I understand about linking independent clauses with a semi or em dash. But the repetition makes me want to put a comma in there, and I can't articulate why.
Is there a real reason for a comma in this sentence, or is it some weird, fuzzy idea I've picked up?
Either way, I'd like to be able to articulate what is correct and why.
Thanks so much in advance.
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