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My novel is written in past tense, but I have a paragraph where my MC thinks about his future. It goes something like this:
“Imagine you are cured,” she said. “Can you picture your life without the blisters?”
“Yeah!” I said. That was easy: I’ll get back to school, stop wearing these long-sleeved shirts, and nobody is going to call me pizza-face ever again. I might transfer to another school, and I’m going to have three friends. Okay, one friend. But we are going to have a heck of a good time.
Is it correct?
Thanks for any advice!
“Imagine you are cured,” she said. “Can you picture your life without the blisters?”
“Yeah!” I said. That was easy: I’ll get back to school, stop wearing these long-sleeved shirts, and nobody is going to call me pizza-face ever again. I might transfer to another school, and I’m going to have three friends. Okay, one friend. But we are going to have a heck of a good time.
Is it correct?
Thanks for any advice!
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