This is too short for SYW, and I'm not sure I'd get the right kind of feedback down there. Would you read these lines and tell me what impression you get of the character being described? I need to know if I've got this right.
All questions, concerns or comments appreciated.
All questions, concerns or comments appreciated.
[FONT="][/FONT][FONT="]Crusoe was the most stunningly beautiful person I’d ever seen. Always had been, and so far no one had come close to stealing the title. Hawk-like eyes. Cheekbones any model would kill for, just to get a shot at having them implanted, with an unquestioningly androgynous edge.[/FONT][FONT="][/FONT][FONT="][/FONT][FONT="]
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[FONT="]He preferred people to address him as “he,” but Crusoe was fluid as mercury on a see-saw. For the last eight months, his look had included waist-length hair so jet black that it reflected light in shades of blue and violet. [/FONT]