Voyeurism Story

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I am writing an erotic story about a woman who is running from the mob who is after her boyfriend for his debts. She escapes and runs into a brothel. The madam agrees to let her stay, but under one condition: she has to watch the prostitutes pleasure their johns. I need some help with writing from the voyeur's POV.
 

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You just have to write it all as interior monologue. She can think her thoughts, obviously, and physically react. Like, if you were at a movie and you were narrating what was on the screen in your head, how would you write it? Just hear the monologue in your head of what she's seeing, what the players look like, what she's feeling, maybe interrupt every so often with a physical beat that reflects her reaction (or maybe she has to itch her nose...whatever), or whether she's feeling awkward or invasive or loving the experience or...endless combinations thereof. It's really not that different than a scene with another person. She's just talking to herself.
 

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The internet if full of pornography. Just look for a video of a prostitute with her client , preferably on a hidden camera. Write what you see.
 

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I find it helps to write in genres that are personal turn-ons. If you're into voyeurism, then place yourself in that situation and imagine what it would be like to see what the character is seeing. Talk about details you find arousing. Make the reader feel what you're feeling.