It's looking good! Glad you got all fancy--I told you you could do it!!!
Here's where you can make a few alts with the different fonts, and see which pops the most. (you can copy the layer FX and paste on each one. I don't have photoshop open, and it's so automatic to me, but I think it's under LAYER at top, or a right click to find
copy layer style, then
paste layer style. You can also just dupe layer and change font.
I liked the precious font--LOL, but totally go with the one that pops!
If you want to get fancy again, dupe layer of art at bottom of file. Hit the symbol at bottom of layer palette that looks like a square with a dotted circle and hold alt. If it doesn't put a black square beside it, select new square and FILL with Black. Where it says NORMAL at top of layer palette, check drop down list and pick MULTIPLY. Where it says 100, try 20% or so. Then with a big, soft airbrush, paint in the black square with white behind the tag line. You can undo and try again if you're mousing it. (It's harder without a wacom tablet.)
I think just a bit of darkening there will help the tag pop. You can change the 20% after to whatever works.
Have some fun and get down with your bad self!!!