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One of my greatest pet peeves in writing is the use of the same word multiple times in a short space of time. For example, I remember a passage in a fantasy novel that I read before which had something along the lines of :
"he stared coldly into her eyes. Then, he spoke in a cold voice, coldly stating that..."
I couldn't go on, it was just too much for me.
That's not the exact passage, but that's the gist of it. As a general rule I try to avoid writing the same word again and again, as if I do need to, I'll use a thesaurus to assist me. So I would write pleasure, then rapture, then joy.
Does this really bug anyone else? Both in reading other works and in my own writing, I try to avoid the repetition of the same words in a short space of time. I was wondering if anyone else felt the same way.
"he stared coldly into her eyes. Then, he spoke in a cold voice, coldly stating that..."
I couldn't go on, it was just too much for me.
That's not the exact passage, but that's the gist of it. As a general rule I try to avoid writing the same word again and again, as if I do need to, I'll use a thesaurus to assist me. So I would write pleasure, then rapture, then joy.
Does this really bug anyone else? Both in reading other works and in my own writing, I try to avoid the repetition of the same words in a short space of time. I was wondering if anyone else felt the same way.