NaNo-isms 2016

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arikdiver

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This is pure poetry:

They didn’t make it much further before a tree across the track prevented them from going any further.

I know what this is mean to be, but know idea how I got it so wrong:
Lonan ate the muesli bar, swelling it in only three bites.
 
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