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    Making magic with words arikdiver's Avatar
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    This is pure poetry:

    They didn’t make it much further before a tree across the track prevented them from going any further.

    I know what this is mean to be, but know idea how I got it so wrong:
    Lonan ate the muesli bar, swelling it in only three bites.
    Last edited by arikdiver; 11-18-2016 at 02:09 PM. Reason: Added another

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