This one is confusing me a little.
I understand passive voice, and why it should be avoided, but a few scenes I've shared on here lacked immediacy. I'd tried to avoid writing using a passive voice (although it occasionally slipped in), and assumed writing in the present tense produced immediacy. Given that it didn't, I guess they must be two different things! Any advice would help greatly.
Many thanks
Jon
I understand passive voice, and why it should be avoided, but a few scenes I've shared on here lacked immediacy. I'd tried to avoid writing using a passive voice (although it occasionally slipped in), and assumed writing in the present tense produced immediacy. Given that it didn't, I guess they must be two different things! Any advice would help greatly.
Many thanks
Jon
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