Hi all
Newbie question I'm afraid.
I've just started to write my first novel, having previously only ever written two short stories. I'm getting tons of brilliant advice from the SF&F 'share your work' section and am modifying the way I write as I go along.
One thing I've noticed though - the crits I've received have been hugely valuable to me and I really am grateful for everyone's time, however, a recurring LBL criticism is that I often confuse people with either plot elements or something a character has said which doesn't make immediate sense. Admittedly, I havent planned out the plot, and I'm learning about the characters as I write - but I did try to plan out a different novel earlier in the year and spent a lot of time working out who the characters were and what was going to happen as the plot unfolded etc etc. The end result was that the story felt stymied and flat, and I abandoned it. It seems I can only write if I don't feel constrained by a plan (which probably means I'll never be a good writer, but I'm thoroughly enjoying the process).
Anyway - I'm extremely confused about the amount of explanation I need to put into the narrative. I'd have thought that the reader would occasionally want to try to understand why something odd or enigmatic had just happened, rather than understanding everything as they read the book.
If I could give you a real life example (easier to explain than anything from my own writing). There's a series on (UK) TV at the moment about Queen Victoria in the early years of her reign. Victoria is besotted with the British prime-minister Lord Melbourne - a much older man. In once scene, Victoria is attending some sort of royal function and Lord M gives her a flower. Her future husband (Prince Albert) is also there and asks her to dance (they've only just met). So, Victoria slips the flower into the front of her dress and dances with the prince. At that point, my girlfriend (who was watching the show with me) said, 'oh, she's put Lord M's flower between them' - like a barrier between her and the prince.
Now, I never even spotted that. I'm sure the writer intended the symbolism, and once my girlfriend had pointed it out, I thought it was a great piece of writing. But - if I had read that part in a book, I wouldn't have understood the significance. Judging by the crits I've received, dialogue, actions or plot points of a similarly vague nature are often picked up upon and the resulting crit is 'I'm confused.' I (as a reader) would have been confused by the Victoria/flower thing, but it was still great writing and the story would have been diminished if it was taken out.
The SYW crits I've had have already massively improved the way I write (all my bad habits I now know I have are in my signature) - but this 'I'm confused' type of crit is galling as I can't work out how to fix it. I want the reader to wonder about stuff. But if I explain things, I don't enjoy reading my own work.
Sorry - very vague question, I know. But how do you decide how much to explain, whether it be through dialogue, actions or narrative? Do you make sure that important plot points are very clear, but minor points can be played around with and left as subtle clues for the reader? Any advice would be hugely appreciated.
Cheers
Jon
Newbie question I'm afraid.
I've just started to write my first novel, having previously only ever written two short stories. I'm getting tons of brilliant advice from the SF&F 'share your work' section and am modifying the way I write as I go along.
One thing I've noticed though - the crits I've received have been hugely valuable to me and I really am grateful for everyone's time, however, a recurring LBL criticism is that I often confuse people with either plot elements or something a character has said which doesn't make immediate sense. Admittedly, I havent planned out the plot, and I'm learning about the characters as I write - but I did try to plan out a different novel earlier in the year and spent a lot of time working out who the characters were and what was going to happen as the plot unfolded etc etc. The end result was that the story felt stymied and flat, and I abandoned it. It seems I can only write if I don't feel constrained by a plan (which probably means I'll never be a good writer, but I'm thoroughly enjoying the process).
Anyway - I'm extremely confused about the amount of explanation I need to put into the narrative. I'd have thought that the reader would occasionally want to try to understand why something odd or enigmatic had just happened, rather than understanding everything as they read the book.
If I could give you a real life example (easier to explain than anything from my own writing). There's a series on (UK) TV at the moment about Queen Victoria in the early years of her reign. Victoria is besotted with the British prime-minister Lord Melbourne - a much older man. In once scene, Victoria is attending some sort of royal function and Lord M gives her a flower. Her future husband (Prince Albert) is also there and asks her to dance (they've only just met). So, Victoria slips the flower into the front of her dress and dances with the prince. At that point, my girlfriend (who was watching the show with me) said, 'oh, she's put Lord M's flower between them' - like a barrier between her and the prince.
Now, I never even spotted that. I'm sure the writer intended the symbolism, and once my girlfriend had pointed it out, I thought it was a great piece of writing. But - if I had read that part in a book, I wouldn't have understood the significance. Judging by the crits I've received, dialogue, actions or plot points of a similarly vague nature are often picked up upon and the resulting crit is 'I'm confused.' I (as a reader) would have been confused by the Victoria/flower thing, but it was still great writing and the story would have been diminished if it was taken out.
The SYW crits I've had have already massively improved the way I write (all my bad habits I now know I have are in my signature) - but this 'I'm confused' type of crit is galling as I can't work out how to fix it. I want the reader to wonder about stuff. But if I explain things, I don't enjoy reading my own work.
Sorry - very vague question, I know. But how do you decide how much to explain, whether it be through dialogue, actions or narrative? Do you make sure that important plot points are very clear, but minor points can be played around with and left as subtle clues for the reader? Any advice would be hugely appreciated.
Cheers
Jon