The Prisoner

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This was originally penned for the now-canceled anthology. Sharing it here.
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The Prisoner


Escape. Run.
Burst through thorny thicket
dogs howling on heels
chasing sins committed years ago
push me to
this dowager-owned, half-lit roaming hulk
scraping coins from bottom dwellers' pockets.
Exhausted fairground organ noises sighing
in wet August air;
chipped, porcelain show horses
plod in meaningless circles
while cherubs with half smiles
teeth, cotton candy sewn, wander as
bloated barkers bombast echoes.
For darkened tent favors cashed in twisted lust
aroma of animal shit smothers my sense and pride
an aftermath of disgust, for a ticket to ride
a fake moustache
some foundation
a wig
the irony of colored stripes
and time
to continue
running from sins
from years ago
 

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Jason, I really liked this one and I'm so glad you're sharing it more widely -- it deserved more attention.

I have one in progress about a serial killer lurking at the carnival. If and when I pull it into shape, I will share it.
 

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it is very good, Jason. And your usual, wonderful way with words, pacing, and description are in full force. Fantastic.