Something new for National Poetry Day

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Each day
I cannot say
'good morning,' and
sniff the night's slumber
that clings to your skin,
glance as your breast
slips through spaghetti straps
free and easy,
the thin moist gloss
across your lips and eyes;
an introduction to pre-dawn's play
are days that
forever crowd against the winter solstice.
Long stretches of void
where the soul bides numb
in restless sleep
waiting to be freed & howling
though my lips will tremble
confessing to the other how
this is no longer my beloved
 

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It's lovely and sad, Jason.

I find myself wanting a title that chimes in with your last couple of lines, but don't have any suggestions. If I think of any, I'll float them.
 

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This fucker hurts. Your light touch with such a heavy topic is beautiful and not cloying. But I do have to dock a 1/2 a point for your use of the m-word. *shivers* ;)

Nice work and thanks for sharing it.
 

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But I do have to dock a 1/2 a point for your use of the m-word. *shivers* ;)

That made me laugh, Sara! I admit, I'm not fond of that word either (though it did not spoil the poem for me).
 

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I was shooting for lovely and sad. So, I think I was on target,. It hurt to write. I changed a word that hurt too much.

Thanks, all.