Camp Nanowrimo - Line of the Day

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meowzbark

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We had one of these threads going last Nano and I loved reading excerpts from everyone's camp novel. Feel free to post your favorite line of the day here. My favorite line thus far:

A slithering snake of people wind the wall-less corridor and slowly inch forward; somewhere far ahead, the first in line is being served.
 
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mrsmig

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I'm editing rather than writing fresh, but I'll post one of my rewrites, just for giggles:

He barely felt the final two blows; barely knew it when they lowered him to his knees and left him there, with his arms still stretched upward in a cruel parody of supplication.
 
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