Hello, I have a question about jump back and forth on my timeline without being confusing.
I am writing a ya suspense novel in 1st person past POV.
The majority of the action occurs in 2015, but in the first 4 (at least) chapters, there are several flashbacks that need to occur in order for the story to build suspense and for certain things to make sense.
So, basically, so far I have three chapters completed and it goes something like this:
Chapter 1
July 15 2015
two years ago
July 13 2015
five years ago
Chapter 2
July 13 2015
July 15 2015
Chapter 3
10+years ago
July 17 1015
I don't know how many more flashback that I need before I can just stay in one time period.
I think I've done a good job of telling what time it is with the first line of each scene "When I was 13..." "The day after the body was found..." But, I just want to make sure that the story doesn't confuse readers.
Some of the scenes are about 700-1000 words, some are much longer.
Basically, what I want to know is: Is it enough to tell in the first sentence what part of the timeline the story is told in? Should I put a date before each scene? Should I just separate each time jump into it's own chapter? Any examples of a writer doing this effectively?
I think that the story flows pretty well, I just want to make sure that the readers will be able to follow.
I am writing a ya suspense novel in 1st person past POV.
The majority of the action occurs in 2015, but in the first 4 (at least) chapters, there are several flashbacks that need to occur in order for the story to build suspense and for certain things to make sense.
So, basically, so far I have three chapters completed and it goes something like this:
Chapter 1
July 15 2015
two years ago
July 13 2015
five years ago
Chapter 2
July 13 2015
July 15 2015
Chapter 3
10+years ago
July 17 1015
I don't know how many more flashback that I need before I can just stay in one time period.
I think I've done a good job of telling what time it is with the first line of each scene "When I was 13..." "The day after the body was found..." But, I just want to make sure that the story doesn't confuse readers.
Some of the scenes are about 700-1000 words, some are much longer.
Basically, what I want to know is: Is it enough to tell in the first sentence what part of the timeline the story is told in? Should I put a date before each scene? Should I just separate each time jump into it's own chapter? Any examples of a writer doing this effectively?
I think that the story flows pretty well, I just want to make sure that the readers will be able to follow.