Hi there. I've been a lurker for years and am profoundly grateful this website exists, but have never actually posted anything until now.
In my current writing project I have a scene in which I want to be in two people's heads at once (I am trying earnestly to tackle 3rd person omni after 2 books of 3rd person limited), but separated by 24 hours.
I'm having some success with transitional sentences at each switch (about every three paragraphs), but my past perfect is starting to feel muddy against my past simple and I was wondering if anyone had any bright ideas as to examples of this? Books, chapters, essays... Or perhaps some of you have attempted it yourselves?
An option, of course, is to simply split the scenes into two separate time periods, one after another, but I like a challenge...
Any ideas?
In my current writing project I have a scene in which I want to be in two people's heads at once (I am trying earnestly to tackle 3rd person omni after 2 books of 3rd person limited), but separated by 24 hours.
I'm having some success with transitional sentences at each switch (about every three paragraphs), but my past perfect is starting to feel muddy against my past simple and I was wondering if anyone had any bright ideas as to examples of this? Books, chapters, essays... Or perhaps some of you have attempted it yourselves?
An option, of course, is to simply split the scenes into two separate time periods, one after another, but I like a challenge...
Any ideas?