First Line of NaNo 2015

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Thelassa

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Finally managed to get things going before I fell asleep last night. It's not great, but it's serviceable until I revise it:

There was a chill in the air as I jogged along a path at the park.
 

Damoclian

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"Sethian Bhaulmante; the True Neutral; the Still Heart; and the greatest idiot in the history of the Silver-Solstice, entered the waste between worlds."

Keep in mind, this is a first person narrative from Sethian's PoV, so not sure I'll stick with it.
 

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"The Wolf’s arm tightened. Spots filled her vision."

That's from the top of today's word count, but I'm one of those lame, cheater NaNoer's who's halfway through the first draft already.... :Shrug:
 

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Before the murder, Charles had been on the rise as a faith healer. He'd continued his trade in prison.
 

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The gurney clatters as they push it over a threshold; she yanks at the restraining straps, panic welling in her chest.

I'm pretty happy with it :D
 

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Felicity shoved her bleeding hand in the pocket of her trousers and, with her other hand, she brushed the salt quartz from her tunic.
 

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"When I looked up from my sewing, Eva stood in the doorway with her face white as bone."
 

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An earthworm has five hearts.


I like it honestly. Not quite sure why...but I do haha.
 
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