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In my latest short story one of my characters is coming across like a jerk and that's not what I intended or want for this piece. This is supposed to be a love story of sorts. But I'm having a hard time showing why these two characters in this so-called love story fell in love or are in love. I want them to have flaws, but not to the extent readers would question their feelings or intentions. I don't want this to be a stupid girl falls for a jerk guy. How do I make this guy still flawed, but make the love story work on the page?
I finding it a little difficult to show multiple sides of the male character within the confines of a short story. The thing is I am taking some of JAR's advice and basing these characters and some of the events on reality. And in real life, this guy is not a jerk. So, why am I making him one?
I finding it a little difficult to show multiple sides of the male character within the confines of a short story. The thing is I am taking some of JAR's advice and basing these characters and some of the events on reality. And in real life, this guy is not a jerk. So, why am I making him one?