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Acceptable as a verb, or not?

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Memories of stepping on hot asphalt-gum must be what guilts him into wadding it up in a tissue instead.
 

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I wouldn't use it unless your character would speak that way, and from the rest of that sentence, I don't think he/she would. Maybe it's just me but I tend to find nouns used as verbs annoying.
 

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Post #4 = "Ugh!"

King Neptune, I agree—and so does certain google hits. Just not my Webster.

Fruitbat, I also agree—and also why I asked.

Crazy, isn't it? I'll sort it out. Thank you both. :)
 

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Just because you can do something does not mean you should. Sometimes turning a noun into a verb works well. Sometimes it sucks dead dust bunnies. Trust your ear.
 

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Let me put it this way. I would use it in dialogue, but only if I wanted to show that characters as someone who wasn't very educated, and who knew nothing about proper use of language.
 

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Acceptable as a verb, or not?

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Memories of stepping on hot asphalt-gum must be what guilts him into wadding it up in a tissue instead.

I vote yes. Even if it's not officially a verb, it fits the voice and tone of that sentence perfectly.

Fiction is not formal writing.
 
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I vote yes. Even if it's not officially a verb, it fits the voice and tone of that sentence perfectly.

Fiction is not formal writing.
And quite often we're writing dialogue by a character, or narrative exposition within the POV of a character who doesn't normally use the formally correct suffixes to verbify a noun.

In a context like that, using the nouny form of a verbed noun is a better fit for the voice and tone where using a suffixerated form would actually be bad fiction writing.
 
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