Hey guys. Could you please help me figure out how to structure these sentences? It looks wrong! Thanks.
"Pray to me," he said, pointing down. "Just the captain," he added, for the soldiers were also sinking to their knees.
Is it fine like that, or should the second dialogue string start a new line:
"Pray to me," he said, pointing down.
"Just the captain," he added, for the soldiers were also sinking to their knees.
"Pray to me," he said, pointing down. "Just the captain," he added, for the soldiers were also sinking to their knees.
Is it fine like that, or should the second dialogue string start a new line:
"Pray to me," he said, pointing down.
"Just the captain," he added, for the soldiers were also sinking to their knees.