Quote Originally Posted by captflash80 View Post
Tom Rowley realized the next few hours were critical to his survival. Now he wondered how his carefully crafted game went south so quickly. He'd walked away confident, his safety assured, but the game turned to shit fast leaving him exposed.
Hi, capt.

I get the impression you've got quite the story percolating in your head, but I don't yet see it hitting the page. I would not read on. Sorry.