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Hey,
Could I request you to beta-read my YA urban fantasy novel?
Outline:
It's 65000 words long and features a non-believer protagonist, who's fallen in love with a Christian girl. (No, it's not a religious fantasy.)
Weird stuff starts happening to the MC and soon he meets God and later the Devil.
His life is turned upside down in no time but that's just the beginning of troubles for him and twists await him...
Mostly, I want help with plot, characterization, pacing, etc. rather than the meticulous things like line-by-line crit. Your help is needed for tackling the macro issues.
Please PM me if you need to know more information.
Your help is important to me.
Thanks for reading,
Skabr
Could I request you to beta-read my YA urban fantasy novel?
Outline:
It's 65000 words long and features a non-believer protagonist, who's fallen in love with a Christian girl. (No, it's not a religious fantasy.)
Weird stuff starts happening to the MC and soon he meets God and later the Devil.
His life is turned upside down in no time but that's just the beginning of troubles for him and twists await him...
Mostly, I want help with plot, characterization, pacing, etc. rather than the meticulous things like line-by-line crit. Your help is needed for tackling the macro issues.
Please PM me if you need to know more information.
Your help is important to me.
Thanks for reading,
Skabr