Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

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mourn the Summer past
cut the deadwood prune the sage
prepare Winter's tomb
 

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Prepare Winter's tomb
with a blanket of white snow
Then, fly me to Greece
 

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and rustles the trees,
the sun says of the south wind
how else can they dance?
 

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don't kill the music
it's the rhythm that takes me
far beyond myself
 

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there is a woman
and of course there is a cat
so where oh where is the man?
 

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just to clarify, friend. in the chain, we try to stick to the 5-7-5 format, to make it easier.

so if its cool, i'll trim this down.

so where is the man?
is he out being a man?
or is he just not
 

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Godfather said:
just to clarify, friend. in the chain, we try to stick to the 5-7-5 format, to make it easier.

so if its cool, i'll trim this down.

so where is the man?
is he out being a man?
or is he just not

Just to clarify: Of course it is. I just screwed up my final edit. It was supposed to be:

there is a woman
and of course there is a cat
so where is the man?

How clever of you to figure out my true intent!
 

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but paid no mortgage
leased a castle in the air
the rent was worth it
 

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though the woman could
she hesitated too long
impossible now
 

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Dictating her fate
beyond her comprehension
secret forces work
 

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he listens to words
hears rushing wind and singing
but sees only stars
 

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and tries to reach them
longs desperately to help
they stream past too fast