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Last chance. Wrong answer
will send you in the pool with
seals, whales and dolphins.
 

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preparing to pounce
each day we plot, steal, ravage.
only the strong live
 

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only the strong live
under jagged sky's burnt sun
toppling mountains
 

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cellajam: I like it very much, but it does not meet the strict syllable count of haiku, which is 5-7-5.

I'll add a few words to get us back on track:

Lost treasures, she said,
are like promises, made once,
then ever sought out.
 

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Oops, forgot where I was. ;) Thanks for the reminder.

then ever sought out,
the jewel that lies within,
the spark that lights it
 
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Might be worth a try—
The winter shortcut across
Molly’s Pond tempts me.
 

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Molly's pond tempts me
dolphins, frogs, ducks. acquatic life
is so relaxing
 

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Kitty cat? Heaven
will never love your bad deeds
as I did on Earth.