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    beneath Earth's red rust
    single thought uncurls, stretching--
    only to be squashed
    corny: This is the way of the future. Nonsensical fragments and oozingly gross weeping sores of language spilling over the keyboard.

    I feel like corny needs to have a book review site, really.

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    only to be squashed
    by the Hulk or his buddy
    hero, Iron Man
    "We do not talk - we bludgeon one another with facts and theories gleaned from cursory readings of newspapers, magazines and digests."

    Henry Miller

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    Hero, Iron man,
    frightened little boy rewrites
    his own short story
    Last edited by kkbe; 01-24-2013 at 02:36 PM.

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    his own short story
    is garbled junk, total mess
    will nothing save it?
    corny: This is the way of the future. Nonsensical fragments and oozingly gross weeping sores of language spilling over the keyboard.

    I feel like corny needs to have a book review site, really.

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    will nothing save it
    curled wilted cracked wee petals
    ideas plant within

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    ideas plant within
    strife, grow in conflict, harvest
    as bittersweet fruit.

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    As bittersweet fruit
    These winter sighs swell, ripen
    In gardens of ice

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    In gardens of ice
    the fortress of solitude
    prisms multiply

    hehe
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    sparrow in the treetop - tweet, tweet!

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    A bird doesn't sing because it has an answer, it sings because it has a song.
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    prisms multiply,
    reflecting each dull corner
    of my prison state

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    Of my prison state
    Habit is the capital
    Hung with dusty crepe

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    Hung with dusty crepe
    and upholstered in velvet
    parlor memories
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    sparrow in the treetop - tweet, tweet!

    Jennifer Rockwell on Goodreads

    A bird doesn't sing because it has an answer, it sings because it has a song.
    Maya Angelou

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    Parlor memories:
    worn sofa, crocheted blanket,
    your arms warm around me.

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    Your arms warm around me.
    I almost believe you care
    for me, Christian Grey.

    hehe

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    for me, Christian Grey
    is best played by Matt Bomer
    o chiselled man-god
    corny: This is the way of the future. Nonsensical fragments and oozingly gross weeping sores of language spilling over the keyboard.

    I feel like corny needs to have a book review site, really.

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    o chiselled man-god
    how come you are on your Sloan
    Tod? Ye god. Ye clod.
    Last edited by Paul; 01-26-2013 at 03:58 AM. Reason: coz I'm a writer, innit? (bowing to the metre)

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    "Tod." Ye God. Ye clod.
    Definition? Foliage.
    It's ivy, mostly.
    From CHERRY:
    “He started saying all this bad stuff about you and I got mad and told him to cut it out, and then he—”
    “What? Then he what?” Fuck.
    “Then, he—”
    “What?”
    “He—”
    “Stop.” I had to get out of there before I suffocated or had a heart attack or something.

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    It's ivy, mostly,
    that clings to your bricks, hiding
    your secrets in shade.

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    Your secrets in shade?
    Uh uh. She wrote everything.
    It's a best-seller.


    hehe
    Last edited by kkbe; 01-28-2013 at 04:32 AM.

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    It's a best seller
    though I'm the worst for it.
    A solemn cellar

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    A solemn celler
    chisled limestone staircases
    underground highway

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    underground highway
    excavating the past to
    foretell the future

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    Foretell the future
    A speck of dust glistens still
    Like a crystal ball.

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    like a crystal ball,
    the child's pale blue eyes reflect
    some forgotten place.

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    some forgotten place
    haunts the corner of my mind,
    probing. I keep still.

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    probing. I keep still
    unknown calm heightens senses
    majestic skies stare

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