Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

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what's the difference?
while you're that and i am this,
inside we're akin.
 

zanzjan

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Inside we're akin:
Heart. Lungs. That dark, cold place where
Fear has carved a nest.
 

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Fear has carved a nest
wonderous powerful field
captured broken flight
 

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captured broken light
like a leaf catches rain
the horizon is out of sight
 

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brush stroked cloudy vein
the horizon is out of sight
sheer fanned delight
 

JohnL

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sheer fanned delight
among the purple flowers;
hummingbird breakfast
 

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Called him Hemingbird
gazes, steely cold hazed stares
ocean's lost iceberg
 
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JohnL

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ocean's lost iceberg
succumbs to midsummer heat
in my glass of Coke
 

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In my glass of Coke
luscious liquid silky blend
icecubes backwards float
 

kkbe

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What the hell is this?
No-one breaks our haiku chain!
Death to those who try!

Okay. Okay. . .

"Icecubes backwards float."
What does that shit even mean?
Lord, this is insane.
 
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Lord, this is insane!
Precision, simplicity,
and the subtle twist.
 

JohnL

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‘That and the seasons,’
said Mars to Earth regarding
their differences
 

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Their differences
roughness created define
crackled handiworks
 

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crackled handiworks
unwritten clean lines laced youth
timeless touched torment
 

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After rushing roar
raindrops singularly soar
falls over edges
 

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Salmon kick my ass
clashed, crashed upstream staged battles
life known, turned toward start