Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

A. Hamilton

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warmed over with rhyme
pretty lie with edges smoothed
harshest words now tame
 

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looks upon the day
through a gimlet eye - well, two
same again... Monday
 

rich

Preferring the night

the Tom's hushed paws coursed through yards

in deep feline thought
 

A. Hamilton

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now, what shall i break?
silence? a habit? a heart?
choice lies in intent
 

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Choice lies in intent
how do I know what yours meant,
please confirm receipt
 

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ship cost out of site
hop in my tippecanoe
and let's rock, baby
 

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rock and roll away
grunge, rap, punk, emo, new wave
funeral march next
 

rich

ALpha, I spent some time contemplating Lins. Don't do that to me.

Then he'll be all mine

Assumed Madame Butterfly

"Not now, one fine day."
 

rich

Notice I could've posted "un bel di" but I'm not a showoff--also the next poet would have to know Italian.
 

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to discerning the desert-
shades of sand and bone