Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

JAlpha · Jul 27, 2008

there is another...
unnerving break in the chain
how unfortunate

Dario D. · Jul 27, 2008

i spy said:
allow me to introduce you to 'sarcasm'.

I understand sarcasm. Pitching people's haiku as cliche-fests is not sarcasm. (and don't even bother trying to excuse yourself. I can *read* what you wrote)

meaning plentiful
like the time we sailed
on a raft of popsicle sticks (with tremendous jokes!)

(Edit: woops, missed the above. Ignore this post. :tongue

)

i spy · Jul 27, 2008

JAlpha said:
there is another...
unnerving break in the chain
how unfortunate

how unfortunate

that people can be high-strung;
misunderstanding.

JAlpha · Jul 27, 2008

misunderstanding
is the love between two fools
said Oscar Wilde

i spy · Jul 27, 2008

JAlpha said:
misunderstanding
is the love between two fools
said Oscar Wilde(<--danger, Will Robinson--only 4 syllables)

said Oscar Wilde, it
is better to be talked a-
bout than not at all!

Teena · Jul 27, 2008

out of sync, but perhaps....

wise men learn quickly
when to put words on paper
when to be silent

Beyondian · Jul 27, 2008

when to be silent
far more precious a talent
than all Sheba's riches

Teena · Jul 28, 2008

all Sheba's riches
won't buy time nor intellect
those are God's province

[Thx Beyondian for your note

.]

Beyondian · Jul 28, 2008

My pleasure Teena. May I just say how much I like that haiku? Pure gold.

Those are God's province
The purity of depthless
love and glory, His

Dario D. · Jul 29, 2008

love and glory, His
feminine style and beauty, Hers
everything they are, Theirs forever

kdnxdr · Jul 31, 2008

everything was theirs
forever after, nothing
desired but their love

onestepp · Jul 31, 2008

Desired for their love
gallons, buckets, and bushels
evergreen buffet

Teena · Jul 31, 2008

evergreen buffet
new worlds as yet uncharted
still in pristine form

Beyondian · Jul 31, 2008

still in pristine form
A warm heart that never left
the cellophane wrap

kdnxdr · Aug 1, 2008

the cellophane wrap
held the remnants of love dust,
twelve faded roses

Beyondian · Aug 4, 2008

twelve faded roses
in a blackened chest of love
ashes of the past

oneblindmouse · Aug 4, 2008

ashes of the past
drift softly through my fingers.
I, their guardian.

kdnxdr · Aug 4, 2008

I, the guardian
watching over from above;
gentle nudges help

Dario D. · Aug 5, 2008

gentle nudges help
unless your hands, feet, and cutesy nose
are simply tied down

WriterUnboxed · Aug 8, 2008

Are simply tied down
Looped threads of sapphire satin
Stronger than they look

[WooHoo! My novel sold!]

Dario D. · Aug 9, 2008

stronger than they look
Gods who live two lives: one awake, one asleep
eternally in love

Phoebe H · Aug 9, 2008

Eternally in love
They pause, embrace extended,
While mountains crumble.

Beyondian · Aug 9, 2008

While mountains crumble
Buds swell, leaves unfurl, and life
Fresh and Green - goes on.

WriterUnboxed · Aug 9, 2008

Fresh and green - goes on
like West Virginia mountains,
ghost lights on the bogs

kdnxdr · Aug 9, 2008

ghost lights on the bogs
blurred headlights in the morn fog
a drifting mind stalls

Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

Smilie Fanatic

Dario D.

integrating

Smilie Fanatic

integrating

Bennie's Mom

musker vyusher

Bennie's Mom

musker vyusher

Dario D.

One of the most important people in the world

Bennie's Mom

musker vyusher

One of the most important people in the world

musker vyusher

The new me

One of the most important people in the world

Dario D.

caramello, per favore

Dario D.

musker vyusher

caramello, per favore

One of the most important people in the world