Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

A. Hamilton

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truths are lies believed
rose petals soon decay
after bitter storms
 

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All was not in vain-
the tears, the costly lawyers-
I have half the house.
 

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Past islands of thought
sink, like Atlantis, leaving
naught but salted truth

OR

Past Islands of thought
sink, like Atlantis, leaving
nothing but the sea

I prefer the first but the second may be easier to work with. :)
 

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Nothing but the sea.
Why did I fall asleep in
This bloody rowboat?
 

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(and not that I want to encourage branching off, but:

Naught but salted truth:
I found the meaning of life
In a bag of chips.)