Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

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passage to manhood
quench my thirst along the way
fall into my hand

fall into my hand
soft as snow twice as chilly
heart of an iceberg
 

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heart of an iceberg
scrapes and splits the metal sheath
titanic struggle
 

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titanic struggle
then a touch leaves lasting limp
walk forever changed
 

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poetinahat said:
heart of an iceberg
scrapes and splits the metal sheath
titanic struggle

I rest my hand on
your face, why do we struggle?
spring brings hurt feelings

 

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walk forever changed
i saw you with another
i'll find a new path
 

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Dovetailing

spring brings hurt feelings
i await summer, hopeful
for a warming fall

i'll find a new path
between hell and high water
for a warming fall
 

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for a warming fall
bonfire, congas, bare feet prance
earnest dance of hope
 

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earnest dance of hope
best travolta boogiesteps
so, your place or mine?
 

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I think of the sun
rising, setting, without fail
and my soul is warmed
 

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back to the eighties

leg warmers, mousse, bare shoulders

break, flash, don’t sit still
 

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When the torture starts
know I will recognize it -
I've seen it before.