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  1. #11001
    Huh. kkbe's Avatar
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    it smells like garlic
    staggers 'cross my torrid tongue
    fetid poetry
    From EFFIN' ALBERT:
    “You don’t like Bad Billy,” Albert says.
    I think, Who’s Bad Billy? but that cop must know ´cause right away his smile disappears and his eyes go unfriendly real fast.
    “Why do you say that, son?” he says. Talking nice but I don’t believe it.
    “She calls you that,” Albert says.
    “How do you—” The cop stops talking. He’s staring at Albert then he drags himself away and looks at me.
    “Go get your mother,” he says.
    He ain’t asking.

    /kk's blog is on hiatus/

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    Fetid poetry:
    where a rose by other names
    might just smell like ass.

  3. #11003
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    Might just smell like ass,
    teen spirit, whatevs you smell
    divine, regardless.
    From EFFIN' ALBERT:
    “You don’t like Bad Billy,” Albert says.
    I think, Who’s Bad Billy? but that cop must know ´cause right away his smile disappears and his eyes go unfriendly real fast.
    “Why do you say that, son?” he says. Talking nice but I don’t believe it.
    “She calls you that,” Albert says.
    “How do you—” The cop stops talking. He’s staring at Albert then he drags himself away and looks at me.
    “Go get your mother,” he says.
    He ain’t asking.

    /kk's blog is on hiatus/

  4. #11004
    New Fish; Learning About Thick Skin
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    Divine, regardless
    pizza from the night before
    stop judging me, ok?

  5. #11005
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    Stop judging me oh
    formalist; acquiesce. Your
    glass house shatters, too.
    Last edited by kkbe; 09-16-2017 at 10:29 PM. Reason: :/
    From EFFIN' ALBERT:
    “You don’t like Bad Billy,” Albert says.
    I think, Who’s Bad Billy? but that cop must know ´cause right away his smile disappears and his eyes go unfriendly real fast.
    “Why do you say that, son?” he says. Talking nice but I don’t believe it.
    “She calls you that,” Albert says.
    “How do you—” The cop stops talking. He’s staring at Albert then he drags himself away and looks at me.
    “Go get your mother,” he says.
    He ain’t asking.

    /kk's blog is on hiatus/

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    Glass house shatters, two
    stones where I only need one;
    third is epilogue.

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    ...third is epilogue;
    fourth, your precious darlings; fifth,
    your writing sucks, kid.

    From EFFIN' ALBERT:
    “You don’t like Bad Billy,” Albert says.
    I think, Who’s Bad Billy? but that cop must know ´cause right away his smile disappears and his eyes go unfriendly real fast.
    “Why do you say that, son?” he says. Talking nice but I don’t believe it.
    “She calls you that,” Albert says.
    “How do you—” The cop stops talking. He’s staring at Albert then he drags himself away and looks at me.
    “Go get your mother,” he says.
    He ain’t asking.

    /kk's blog is on hiatus/

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    Your writing sucks, kid.
    Show don't tell, most of the time,
    but if you tell -- sing.

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