Chain, chain, chain, chain of haiku fools

Rivana

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what was third again?
the commandment of the weak -
to blame another. . .

edit.
Guh, I can't believe I put that nature thing in the wrong thread. It was supposed to go in haikuicide, I'm moving it there and writing another here to keep the flow.
 
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LimeyDawg

Scars are poems too
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looking for the light
we should seek the inner spark
for our greater truths
 

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for our greater truths
patriots convened, haggled;
signed with quill and ink
 

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I'll never grow up
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it's way, way too hard
 

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it's way, way too hard,
dried and burnt, parched like my throat.
what of our cake now?
 

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exploding over me
maple helicopters and
dandelion seeds
 

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fires, I blow hard
but it's the frosting I want
shut eyes, sink the knife
 

A. Hamilton

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shut eyes, sink the knife
think ahead to dinner when
skinning a catfish
 

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skinning a catfish
such difficult painful work
yields sweet fried delight
 

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yields sweet, fried delight
even reptiles love donuts
grease is good, gekko!
 

laurel29

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To cook in that thing
(is) sinister negligence
the fate of a child

(The is in parethesis is there because I couldn't decide how many syllables negligence has :( - I think I need it but I'm not sure)