Hi. I would really appreciate it if some could help me.
I've got a middle grade horror novel 'finished' at just shy of 23K. I would love it if you could give me your honest opinion. I feel like the story is possibly too short, and I have doubts about the ending.
It's about a young boy named Alice Johnson. He runs away from home and gets lost in a haunted forest inhabited by zombie-like monsters. (They are dead, but intelligent.) And it's told in first person.
Thanks again.
I've got a middle grade horror novel 'finished' at just shy of 23K. I would love it if you could give me your honest opinion. I feel like the story is possibly too short, and I have doubts about the ending.
It's about a young boy named Alice Johnson. He runs away from home and gets lost in a haunted forest inhabited by zombie-like monsters. (They are dead, but intelligent.) And it's told in first person.
Thanks again.