Hello. My novel is becoming more and more resemblant of an actual novel. As such, I figured a beta would be a good idea at this stage. It's the first 6,000 words of the ms.
Genre: General Fiction
Plot: A young girl, spurned out of her home, attempts to find meaning on the streets of Paris. Soon forced into prostitution, she learns that the sun does not always find its way to us. As the years pass and life stagnates, she resolves herself to only one goal: escape.
Looking for: Any feedback's appreciated. I'm relatively okay grammar-wise, but any glaring mistakes I would delight to hear of.
I'd be grateful to anyone who wishes to read it. I can also read for you off you'd like. I've never been much of an editor, but I read voraciously, and that should count for something. Thank you.
Genre: General Fiction
Plot: A young girl, spurned out of her home, attempts to find meaning on the streets of Paris. Soon forced into prostitution, she learns that the sun does not always find its way to us. As the years pass and life stagnates, she resolves herself to only one goal: escape.
Looking for: Any feedback's appreciated. I'm relatively okay grammar-wise, but any glaring mistakes I would delight to hear of.
I'd be grateful to anyone who wishes to read it. I can also read for you off you'd like. I've never been much of an editor, but I read voraciously, and that should count for something. Thank you.
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