AW's Super-Dooper Newbie Pub Where Newbies Can Chat With Golden Oldies

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tiggs said:
That's good to hear :)

Here's hoping that it rises from the trunk and Phoenix's into something wonderful.
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Thanks Tiggs. :)

tiggs said:
I made a classic rookie mistake on my trunked one.
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That's me on so many different levels. :greenie

tiggs said:
Story arc is fixable, writing is fixable -- but entirely wrong MC.

In order to save it, I basically need to rewrite the entire thing from a different character's POV.
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On the bright side, if it reads like your work in SYW, you're on the right track.

horrorchix89 said:
...I just really like fires...
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Fire. *chuckles diabolically* :flamethrower

RaiscaraAvalon said:
Good morning guys and gals.
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Morning. :hi:

Ladyxkaa said:
it's nice to see this place lively...
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Hey Christa. :hi:
 
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it wasn't sarcasm

two people thought I'd posted something I shouldn't have and fussed at me and I do this so often that I actually get screamed at by my sister and sometimes chewed out by my mother and I don't use this term lightly but it triggers some serious emotions in me...like serious pain and I am CRYING right now.
 

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Awesome bar humor Tiggs! Love it

Hey Horrorchix89, I did the same thing. I got totally overwhelmed by the advice in QLH. But you have to take it with a grain of salt... I didn't, but you should ;) For me, I got really pissed off and left for awhile, but the voices were still there and I think helped me form the winning query that got me published. I wish I'd had a pub like this... of course then I would've ended up sleeping in the alley behind it nursing a bottle of Zin with lice in my hair.
 
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RaiscaraAvalon said:
I'm hoping I'll be able to recover this weekend, but my clients like to be big PITAs, so I'll probably end up working this weekend.
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Sorry to hear that. The whole 12 days in a row thing really isn't much fun, at all.


Schussman said:
I wish I'd had a pub like this... of course then I would've ended up sleeping in the alley behind it nursing a bottle of Zin with lice in my hair.
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Well, now you do have a pub like this. I hear the cellar's pretty cosy, but probably best to stay in one of the guest rooms up top. The alley and cellar get a bit busy with deliveries and dragons (not always in that order).


Ladyxkaa said:
evening, everyone! I have proper net again!
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Well, if that doesn't deserve another round of drinks, then nothing does.

* Refills everyone's glasses *
 
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