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Seeking Beta Reader for M/M short story

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Angyl78

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Hello-
I am seeking a beta reader, last minute (submission date is the 1st of Feb.) It is a short story m/m genre, barely r-rated sex scenes.

I am looking for a line by line critique or at least a "yes I would by this" or "no I would not."

I posted the first 920 words in the SYW forum.

Please pm on this message. I will check nightly.

Thank you,
Jenny
 
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c.m.n. said:
Hello,

I took a look at your SYW sample and made a comment there. Can I ask how long your story is going to be?
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Thank you for the great critique, I learned quite a bit and was reminded of things I had forgotten. Thank you, again.
 
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