Group Hug!

kdnxdr · Feb 24, 2006

I don't know if anyone will want to do this, it might make our personal bubble spaces get all squashy........I think it would be fun to do a group poem!

Okay.................someone start the first line:

kdnxdr · Feb 24, 2006

If we use the "quote" button, can we keep moving the whole thing forward as one whole thing?

Sarita · Feb 24, 2006

Why not? Here's my first line:

A place devoid of time

kdnxdr · Feb 24, 2006

a place devoid of time
where ticking clocks
and counting tocks
is considered quite a crime,

Cassie88 · Feb 24, 2006

Saritams8 said:
Why not? Here's my first line:

A place devoid of time
A seaside desert town,

OOOPS SORRY

Cassie88 · Feb 24, 2006

a place devoid of time
where ticking clocks
and counting tocks
is considered quite a crime

there's a seaside desert town

kdnxdr · Feb 24, 2006

a place devoid of time
where ticking clocks
and counting tocks
is considered quite a crime.

there's a desert seaside town
where numbered shells
and noontime bells
will make the mayor frown.

ddgryphon · Feb 25, 2006

kdnxdr said:
a place devoid of time
where ticking clocks
and counting tocks
is considered quite a crime.

there's a desert seaside town
where numbered shells
and noontime bells
will make the mayor frown.

Yes, I'm told they often say
the weather's fair,
with rarist air,
begging all who come to stay.

Paint · Feb 25, 2006

a place devoid of time
where ticking clocks
and counting tocks
is considered quite a crime.

there's a desert seaside town
where numbered shells
and noontime bells
will make the mayor frown.

Yes, I'm told they often say
the weather's fair,
with rarist air,
begging all who come to stay

By the rivers dark
came a stranger to this fair town
in a carboard shack fallen down
he camped in city park.

Hidden by swollen yellow reeds

NeuroFizz · Feb 27, 2006

[I hope this is what you had in mind]

a place devoid of time
where ticking clocks
and counting tocks
is considered quite a crime.

there's a desert seaside town
where numbered shells
and noontime bells
will make the mayor frown.

Yes, I'm told they often say
the weather's fair,
with rarist air,
begging all who come to stay

By the rivers dark
came a stranger to this fair town
in a carboard shack fallen down
he camped in city park.

hidden by swollen yellow reeds
he made his bed
inside my head
tears red, he clearly bleeds

viewed wide as the narrows beyond

poetinahat · Feb 27, 2006

a place devoid of time
where ticking clocks
and counting tocks
is considered quite a crime.

there's a desert seaside town
where numbered shells
and noontime bells
will make the mayor frown.

Yes, I'm told they often say
the weather's fair,
with rarist air,
begging all who come to stay

By the rivers dark
came a stranger to this fair town
in a carboard shack fallen down
he camped in city park.

hidden by swollen yellow reeds
he made his bed
inside my head
tears red, he clearly bleeds

viewed wide as the narrows beyond
this chorus dire
constructs my pyre
with bones and lies as bond

I shiver 'neath the moon

Ganesha · Feb 27, 2006

a place devoid of time
where ticking clocks
and counting tocks
is considered quite a crime.

there's a desert seaside town
where numbered shells
and noontime bells
will make the mayor frown.

Yes, I'm told they often say
the weather's fair,
with rarist air,
begging all who come to stay

By the rivers dark
came a stranger to this fair town
in a cardboard shack fallen down
he camped in city park.

hidden by swollen yellow reeds
he made his bed
inside my head
tears red, he clearly bleeds

viewed wide as the narrows beyond
this chorus dire
constructs my pyre
with bones and lies as bond

I shiver 'neath the moon
my naked body runs afoul
faintly I hear your howl
as new lovers we spoon

I hope to be at your side
thoughts racing back to you
laying under cardboard laced with dew
water lapping in with the high tide

Group Hug!

kdnxdr

One of the most important people in the world

kdnxdr

One of the most important people in the world

Sarita

carpe noctem

kdnxdr

One of the most important people in the world

Cassie88

Make mine a double entendre

Cassie88

Make mine a double entendre

kdnxdr

One of the most important people in the world

ddgryphon

King of Sloth Town

Paint

Warrior of Truth

NeuroFizz

The grad students did it

poetinahat

say it loud

Ganesha

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