I've recently finished a short story that decided that it wanted to be a novela (6,000 words.)
In this short story/novela, there's a car full of drunk teenagers. These teenagers hit a monster with their car, hence the title: 'I Hit A Monster With Your Car'
So, there this moment when two of the characters staring into the night, struck with horror and awe, because a third member of the car has been stolen into the night by the monster. I wasn't sure how to break from that heavy moment, so I decided to do something ridiculous.
"I gotta go pee!" A girl screams from the backseat of the car. She is unaware of the horror that has just occurred.
So, here's my question:
In your experience, has inserting humor into a tense scene undercut/undermind the overall goal of the story? For example, my goal for 'I Hit A Monster With Your Car' was to write a scary story that was kind of funny or, at the very least, write a funny story that had one or two good scares in it.
In this short story/novela, there's a car full of drunk teenagers. These teenagers hit a monster with their car, hence the title: 'I Hit A Monster With Your Car'
So, there this moment when two of the characters staring into the night, struck with horror and awe, because a third member of the car has been stolen into the night by the monster. I wasn't sure how to break from that heavy moment, so I decided to do something ridiculous.
"I gotta go pee!" A girl screams from the backseat of the car. She is unaware of the horror that has just occurred.
So, here's my question:
In your experience, has inserting humor into a tense scene undercut/undermind the overall goal of the story? For example, my goal for 'I Hit A Monster With Your Car' was to write a scary story that was kind of funny or, at the very least, write a funny story that had one or two good scares in it.