New Poem on EDP, July 9

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I have a poem, Sonata, on Every Day Poets July 9. If you have the time, please check it out.
 

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It's thanks to AW and all of the writers here from whom I've learned so much.
 

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Beer and barn women, all
for some good cause. Warm,
and alluring.


alluring's so pregnant here.

And Sonata or not, a finale like:

then gravity slowly brings it down to us.
Dense, moist. Like lightning hushed up


Would be the bomb... best imo

Well done you.
 

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Stepford maybe? In a sense, maybe even a prostitute.

The poem brings one word to my mind... affair. Don't know why.
 

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She is the dawn
I am the dusk

We circle the ruins
Of our trust

She is the day
I'm am the night

Love lost