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I can describe landscapes and people but when it comes to adding detail to smaller events I flail a bit.
I'm not sure why... It's easy for me to pick out the concrete and specific things that add up to make a cave creepy/a house seem ancient/a man look messy, but when I try to elaborate on how a person does an action I come up blank.
While I might say "he stormed into the room", someone else would say, "he stormed into the room, his [bla bla bla] and his [bla bla bla]." People don't just flinch back from him, they "flinched back, their [bla bla bla]".
I hope you see what I mean
I don't have any trouble with putting things to words, just coming up with these finer details (to elaborate on events) to begin with. I do take notes about people and I do use google to picture things (which is why I have no trouble with immediate visual details), but purposeful action is something else entirely for me. I'd absolutely love to know how to elaborate on/flesh out movement and physical action.
Could someone please give me a step-by-step process of how they (you) do it? Even if it's an almost instantaneous mental thing there's bound to be a way you come up with or branch out to mop up all those intricate details
I'm not sure why... It's easy for me to pick out the concrete and specific things that add up to make a cave creepy/a house seem ancient/a man look messy, but when I try to elaborate on how a person does an action I come up blank.
While I might say "he stormed into the room", someone else would say, "he stormed into the room, his [bla bla bla] and his [bla bla bla]." People don't just flinch back from him, they "flinched back, their [bla bla bla]".
I hope you see what I mean
I don't have any trouble with putting things to words, just coming up with these finer details (to elaborate on events) to begin with. I do take notes about people and I do use google to picture things (which is why I have no trouble with immediate visual details), but purposeful action is something else entirely for me. I'd absolutely love to know how to elaborate on/flesh out movement and physical action.
Could someone please give me a step-by-step process of how they (you) do it? Even if it's an almost instantaneous mental thing there's bound to be a way you come up with or branch out to mop up all those intricate details