UPDATE: Sent the ms back to editor today. (second pass) She gave it a quick review and just wrote me "looks great!" (I cut from 117K to 102K) and no words were mentioned about about more $ so I do believe this 2nd pass is including in the initial fee. I want all to know that I obviously am a nervous newbie and if she helps clean up this final ms as well as she did the first pass I will be ready to get that query letter out! HAPPY!