Quote Originally Posted by MsLaylaCakes View Post
I've had the "1 POV shift per character per scene" comment in my edits too. Takes a while to fix.

If you would rather not cut, maybe use his POV later as a flashback? I've read a few authors who've pulled of 'he remembers a previous sex scene while he masturbates' angle' (though I was almost 100%certain at the time of reading that this was a writearound for a POV issue. Still worked though)
I like this idea.
I switch POVs, but not within a scene. When I cannot decide which POV to write the scene in, I wonder which character has the most at risk in that particular moment, and go with that.
As a reader, I get too distracted by head-hopping, but I could go with telling the same scene from 2 characters POVs if it is well written.