allenparker-That's what I had originally, but alas, it wasn't meant to be.

I hate to cut things, but I may have to, or else try to work them in elsewhere. Don't really want to add another sex scene--got enough of those, I think. The editor did say I could do one POV shift per scene, and nothing is repeated as far as dialog the way I have moved things around now. More like her POV ends when she gets off (tee hee) and --rewind-- his different take on the sex act. I guess I could try to rewrite it so his thoughts are beginning at the end of the snoo snoo, keep it chronological. Sort of a--man, that was fun, but weird, back on my planet blah blah blah.

Meanwhile, back at the ranch...that's odd, Kimber never has a second cup of coffee at home.

Now I'm just procrastinating.

Maybe I'll drop her a line. I just don't want to be a nudgy PIA. I'm low maintenance, I swear!

Thanks for the input, all!