I will be sending in my query either as a scripted comedy sitcom or as a semi scripted comedy reality show.
I asked my friend the novel writer to please read my query letter. He edited it and removed the 1st sentence in which I said I am submitting my show for their consideration. But that's how I've seen the screenwriting queries. Is it different for books? Is that why he removed it? Should I keep it?
My mom who also wrote a novel, removed my contact info (address) from the bottom of the page and put it on the top right. Is that right?
I know both have read books on how to do these things but I am not sure if the same rules apply to a screenplay? Any info appreciated. Thanks!