A long time ago,in one of those I'm-giving-my-teenager-life-lessons conversations with my dad, he waxed on about always having a "teachable spirit". That is, never being so proud as to think you don't have something to learn, and maybe more importantly, never being to proud to learn from anyone, not just people you think are worth learning from.
Many times on here, I see writers come through who do not have a firm grasp on this concept. It's sad really, because clearly talent can be wasted behind a wall of resistance to learn.
I smell of this in your posts.
And really, you seem to be struggling with larger questions about what you want in life and who you are, writing just happens to be an extension of those unanswered questions. The question for you isn't so much, are you teachable? It's, do you even want to learn?
And no one here can answer that.
... Maybe I should shower before coming to post here. Or maybe we all need to get our noses checked. o_o
To be fair, I get and do appreciate what you're saying. And yeah, I can agree... to an extent. I'm not going to say where I disagree, but I suppose personal development in the realm of writing is different than that of the 'Real World'~
Do I want to learn?
I'm present.
I'm just stubborn and a bit finicky... For example, I don't like pie. Sometimes it takes a mallet for me to realize that this pie is delicious! But as soon as you're not looking, I get all "Fuck your pie, I'm gunna go ride bikes." And as soon as I'm over that "Fuck this" part, I'll sit there, nibble the crust, lick the filling until its gone.
Now if it was fried potatoes I would eat that up without question.
And there are times where what I'm writing ends up in the pie area instead of the fried potatoes bin.
Like, TKoE is fried potatoes for me -- I don't care what you say, I'm eatin' it up.
The Farthest Cry... well, bring a mallet and a bicycle.
[ETA: this is the longest damn response I've ever written. I apologize in advance if I've broken any kind of length-related protocol.]
Hi Shirokirie.
YOU! Embarrass me! ;.;
How dare you quote that thing!?
Okay, moving on...
Thank you for further elaborating. I didn't know that actually went that far...
Yes I do have people read it. I ask them if they would be so nice as to mark down whatever stabbed them in the eye, made no sense or otherwise comes off as "what is this?"
Amadan made the post that I wanted to respond to (but didn't) concerning if I thought it was me, or the readers. But, frankly, I thought it was a mixture of both. Yeah I don't have all the skillz and proficienciez. On the other hand, the ones I have read what I'm doing unanimously agree that they get it. They do -- apart from little spelling errors here and there and a missed comma. But I go to the pulpit of my fellow writers and get a bunch of "What the hell is this?"
You see what I'm getting at?
And I just want to note, concerning The Farthest Cry:
Apart from Sen who tends to ramble in his thoughts, that story has no POV. Or would it be better said that it has a
floating POV? I'm not going to claim omniscience with that story... But there is no one consistent POV character. Apart from Sen.
Yeah, I know, I just totally violated one of the fundamentals of storytelling. Shame on me.
The Farthest Cry is actually too big for its constraints. So I fragmented it, horribly. Kos I want it to fit within 10k, no more than 15k words. But its begging towards 40k.
Most ideas I get tend to do that -- with few exceptions -- and the issue for me then becomes how to hack it down to size, and at the same time keep the setting and other little neat elements.
Okay so, just the important details -- I did that.
Arrange them in the order that they work -- I did that too.
Execute it with perfection -- okay, more or less... no.
Keep trying to get it right -- I can say that I am.
But given the things in TFC, the first article alone,
"just the important details," implies that there are a bunch of things that need explaining, if not expanding. And I'm not willing to cut them out. I'm not willing to commit to them, either.
Lastly... would it be considered good to reestablish who each person is from time to time, even if they've been introduced/described/whatever in previous parts?